My Research Paper Draft 2/3

What I mostly feel confident about this draft is the format and the information. I feel this way because  I put a lot of time into this paper. Im a little nervous though, because when I'm not the best writer and I might think its good, but its actually really bad. 

The easiest part was putting the draft together. After I revised my detailed outline all I had to do was put my paper together. The most difficult part was finding reliable sources for my paper. You should focus your feedback on everything about my paper. I want as much feedback as i can get.