Man today was an amazing day. The zoo was full of people. The flamingo exhibit was full of tourists. Being a flamingo is tuff though. Getting made fun of because your legs bend the other way its awful. And just because you are pink doesn't mean you're a girl. Because i'm positive that I'm a guy.
Im trying to go to sleep, but the other flamingos won't shut up. It mainly Bob, Kevin, and Jill. They're so annoying. Talking and constantly drinking the pond water. Man, I could just slap them.
Hey Nathan,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you are an animal. It makes your thoughts better and more interesting. I like how you related being pink to not meaning you are a female. I think this will turn out to be a really good story. I am excited to hear more.
Brooke
Dear nathan,
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like an awesome story! I cant wait to read the finished thing! I like your perspective and how you keep it interesting.
Paul
Hey Nathan,
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like it is going to be a great story.
Dear Nathan,
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to read your short story! It sounds like it is going to be very funny. I like how you explain your charters personality through actually events. Is your character a flamingo? That would be really cool. Great blog.
Happy Blogging,
Annie Kramer
Dear Nathan,
ReplyDeleteThis story sounds like it going to be a good one. So far your's is better than mine
Bennett