Monday, September 9, 2013

Dialogue

It's a bright Saturday morning, at the end of the first week of collage for Jim and Kevin. Jim being much more responsible wakes u early and makes his bed, drinks his coffee, yada, yada, yada... 

"Ahggg," moans Jim as he peered into the fridge. "Kevin!? Did you eat my breakfast burrito last night?

"I don't remember." Kevin moaned half asleep.

"Kevin, it's the first week of school and you're already stealing my food, do it again and i'm kickin you out!" Jim exclaimed. 

"Jeez bro, chillax, I didn't eat your burrito last night," Kevin said "your creepy health food hurts my stomach anyways."

"Then where the heck is my burrito?"

Kevin doesn't answer, he just walk back into his room and goes back to sleep. 

"This is going to be an extremely long school year." Jim commented as he pulls out the supplies to make another burrito.

2 comments:

  1. Dear Nathaniel,

    I liked the randomness and creativity of your post. Keep it up! Good job!

    -P Diddy

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  2. Nathan, this dialogue is really entertaining! I can definitely envision your characters having this conversation on a Saturday morning. Make sure to proofread before posting.

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